Dawn

by Grotesque Angel   Oct 12, 2006


Light trickles over the plain,
transcending a yellow glow upon all life,
Illuminating the shadow,
Warm to the touch

Suddenly the shadow grows,
Dark it is again,
First I thought it was a cloud,
Filled with crystal rain

But I see what has become,
Of our bright life god,
A pitch-black ball of nothing-left,
A shameful timeless state

Light
Shadow
Death

© Copyright 2006 By: Grotesque Angel

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    I like it, it inspired me by writing a new poem... =)
    u can read it soon on my page tho...

    grtz
    Spike

  • 17 years ago

    by ~[Pisang]~[Chives]~

    This poem really shows out the emotions. You built this wonderful image in my mind. Keep up the great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Reborn Rival

    Good choice of words! little short! 5/5 for vocab

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Its good.

    and yeah it is eerie, yes it is sad. and i know you say sad poems make you happy but it makes me happy to know your still writing.

    good ob

  • 18 years ago

    by President Dead

    This is a comment

    Nice write, it's got a creepy, eerieness to it, and i like that.

    Thankyou for your time

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