The Destruction of a lie...

by Nicole   Oct 12, 2006


Lies are told
The truth, no one knows.
I thought you were my friend?
Friends don't lie to each other.
We look to comfort one another.
I don't know where we went wrong.
I know that I was a good friend,
You should have held up your end
Of our friendship bargain.
It was a 50-50 situation.
Which it is no more.
It is nothing. Empty like air.
All because of a lie.
Why?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Failed Attempt

    So simple..yet so powerfull
    well done
    take care xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Short, but very clear-stated poem. Nice job. THe only line I didn't like was
    "Of our friendship bargain."

    I think you should replace "of" with something else.

  • 18 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    I can relate. great poem. i personally thought it was great....
    and i can toootally relate. sadly. =(

  • 18 years ago

    by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ

    It was short but pretty good a cuple lines flowed weird but i know how u feel and i liked it....soo 5/5 keep it up

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