It was short but pretty good a cuple lines flowed weird but i know how u feel and i liked it....soo 5/5 keep it up

I can relate. great poem. i personally thought it was great....
and i can toootally relate. sadly. =(

Short, but very clear-stated poem. Nice job. THe only line I didn't like was
"Of our friendship bargain."

I think you should replace "of" with something else.

So simple..yet so powerfull
well done
take care xoxox