Comments : Best Friends

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    Aww that's so sweet, it's horrible when a friendship changes for the worst. Most of the time it will sort itself out and be better than before.. I hope it is for You too :] excellent poem 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww your friends are so lucky to have you. =) Even if they or you feel as if you're slipping away. I know the feeling, hunny. =( I'm here if you ever have a need to talk. I'm always open to listen. =)

    The poem, yes...The flow was a bit rocky in places, but it all worked out in the end. I'm so sorry if it's true with you and your friends. It's hard losing a friend, and I'm sure we've all gone through it enough times in our life already. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, i can really relate to this poem, very emotional and true feelings, i know how you feel as i been through it before, i can relate this poem to my poem
    (you were my best friend)

    great job and keep the great job like always, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Aww.. thats really sweet. The flow was good, and the writing was one of the best i've seen from you so far. Your friend must be pretty special. A wonderful write. Keep it up! =] 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Great poem. I know how hard it can be to write about a topic like that...amazing job with it! Flow is flawless and your word choice is great. My favorite line is:

    ''You are the bestest friend I ever had"

    I love the word "bestest'' in it because it really shows on a personal level and a friendship that is strong =D

    Keep it up---5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    Damn, i wish i had a best frend... anyways, this was good..5/5

  • Awww that was sweet, so beautifully written, i loved this poem, it flowed so well.... keep it up 5/5
    - faded memories