by donna
Aww that's so sweet, it's horrible when a friendship changes for the worst. Most of the time it will sort itself out and be better than before.. I hope it is for You too :] excellent poem 5/5 xx |
Aww your friends are so lucky to have you. =) Even if they or you feel as if you're slipping away. I know the feeling, hunny. =( I'm here if you ever have a need to talk. I'm always open to listen. =) |
by Goran Rahim
Wow, i can really relate to this poem, very emotional and true feelings, i know how you feel as i been through it before, i can relate this poem to my poem |
by Tammie
Aww.. thats really sweet. The flow was good, and the writing was one of the best i've seen from you so far. Your friend must be pretty special. A wonderful write. Keep it up! =] 5/5 |
Great poem. I know how hard it can be to write about a topic like that...amazing job with it! Flow is flawless and your word choice is great. My favorite line is: |
by Barbara Jean
Damn, i wish i had a best frend... anyways, this was good..5/5 |
Awww that was sweet, so beautifully written, i loved this poem, it flowed so well.... keep it up 5/5 |