Contemplating Suicide 1

Effective use of repetition, and the continual questioning really conveys an sense of anxiety and aggitation.

My hope that these thoughts rarely trouble you.

*VioletRaven*

Good questions.

It was a great poem, i agree wit the same amount of lines. but i absolutely loved this poem. i have thought exactly what u have wrote and its not a happy thought... good job, keep it up =)

Good poem I loved the repetition of "Contemplating suicide". To improve you could keep the same amount of lines in each stanza and making the poem rhyme really would make it better.