by Tylor Dent Oct 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Everynow and then i geel ur presence so close. |
Hmm geel i like the word what does it mean? i might use it lol. great stuff short but so strong. amazing. |
by Marcus
This was a good poem and what would make this poem great is if you,had once set pattern for your ryhme scheme and you separated and organize your stanzas a little better,Hey these are words from the heart so take your time a created a maserpiece,do read few of mine |