Wow, I loved it. It's so cute and sad. (I could've used adorable...) I can totally kind of relate to it. Well written and great job. Keep up the great work. Definitely 5/5 =]
Much Love,
Rayne xx

Trey commas the first line is a run on. again this shit is so strong, must come from a person whose been through a lot but is learning to conquer little by litte...