Crimson Rain

by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ   Oct 12, 2006


I take the knife
and slowly rub my skin
till the blood starts pouring
and I get a darkened grin

The grin is not happy
The grin is for the pain
The pain is from the huge tear
Where my blood slowly falls like rain

The rain is different
It's a dark crimson red
That falls slowly from my wrists
and hide my thoughts of being dead

The raindrops start to quicken
As I lay upon the floor
My wish is finally granted
I am dead forever more

**i know its kinda short...sorry...please comment and rate to help thnx!**

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  • 17 years ago

    by _Giving Up_

    Wow! I can relate to this perfectly! It's awesome! Keep up the great work!
    Gabby
    AKA
    _Giving Up_

  • 18 years ago

    by wish123

    Wow thats really intense wow you have some really deep feelings ---

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole

    Beautiful poem. 5/5. so sad. ur a good writer. well done. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. Very sad. Great rhyming.

  • 18 years ago

    by Andi

    Good job! its really sad but true to a lot of ppl....including me! u r a good poet and should definately keep up the good work!

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