Comments : Til The Day That I Die

  • 18 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This poem is amazing, i loved the bit at the end about standing tall, an excellent job! thanks for the coment on my poem "the lies of a smile"
    keep it up
    hannah

  • 18 years ago

    by Linzii

    Hey I really can relate to this poem. It is the SAD truth of a cutter! Not knowing who to trust and where to begin. I like the way you made it sound. And thanx for the comment!!
    ~Linzii

  • I loved it. i could really relate to it because its for sure true keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashlin

    ... doood.. this poem speaks its words fully.. ive had to go through stuff just like this.. it gets to the point.. on where you kinda make the mistake more than twice.. and it makes you so numb that you dont care anymore..

    great poem..

  • 17 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    I luved it. Keep writing :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Qpid

    Wow!..this is an amazin poem..very well written..sad but nice..loved it!..keep it up!..:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    I can relate to this poem from the first line to the last.. it's a great poem. My true feelings always come out in poetry, people think I'm a happy person, but when they hear my poetry, I'm scared they'll see the real me. Don't ever think you're not good at writting, it's your feelings, it's your words.. how can you be wrong about that?