Good job i liked it..shes trying..but shes just a bit unattentive. so umm ya...ttyl, actaully ur at my house so ill tty in a sec..lol...wow im a dork

love ya lots,
~sore

Not too bad for not writing for a couple months :). I like the rhyme pattern...I can never get it to work for me, but somehow you make it work, wonderfully. The title reminds me of the song Scotty Doesn't Know hahaha.

Ok, seriously now, Ray, your mom does care. she just doesn't see what's going on in your life. I sometimes feel the same way with my mom..

Nice job Ray, keep it up ;)