OHhh Noni! This poem made so much sense! I wasn't thinking concentration camps! Very nicely done, however I don't think we will ever know the pain and torture those people went through. No words could ever describe it, but you did an amazing job trying.

I really like this. Its kinda like a glympse into what it was like in a concentration camp. I really like this. Your poems are really good! Keep it up! xx

This poem really gave me a perspective of what it's like to go to war. I never really stopped and thought of it much. There's so much descriptions in here, that it really gives the reader a feel for what you're talking about. That's a true gift in poetry. =) The flow was excellent, and the rhymes were VERY original. Which is a good thing. Lol. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Oh very nice work, thanx for a awesome read... 5/5 effort.

Wow! i havent read your other poems yet but as I was scrolling down looking for this one I couldnt help but notice the titles of alot of your work has to do with the concentration camps...i really hope you dont write from experience or from victims in your family...

Great write 10/5

Another great job ang great poet of you 5/5 keep it up!

Another good poem n also good use of words 5/5

Was this about a concentration camp?? cuz i got that image when i started reading this. its good 5/5!!

Wow, im speech less, u are a very great poet. 5/5