by Darien Oct 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
A Phase for Teenage Hearts |
by Brittany C
I loved this poem. Please dont ever change it. 5/5 |
Hmm this had a much darker overtone to your usual style although I still enjoyed it. |
Loved this one... well written. keep it up |
Awesome Job, the flow was good, except in this line... |
by Stephanie
Beautiful, yet very sad. Great imagery and flow. I really liked the last stanza the most, it was a wonderful way to end the poem at whole. Great job with this one! Thx for the comment too, it meant a lot to me. 5/5 Keep it up! |