Don't let go.

by David   Oct 13, 2006


Your the one who picked me up when i was down

your the one who turned this frown upside down

if u weren't there i would die

wipe these tears from my eyes

i love u so much

for this is love i cant discribe

my feelings for u are the reasons I'm here

i live like your angel thats always there

i do my best thats all i can say

if u love me in return u will stay

by my side there u are

passion is in the air

when i look into the stares i make a wish

that every day be just like this

when I'm with u i see memories

of when our eyes first meet

it was fun that day we shared

it was like passion was in the air

why do i write these i dint know

i think the reason is because

I'm in love.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good start, the main thing you need to focus on is your spelling and grammar. They may seem like small stuff, but it helps the readers a lot.

    "your" should be "you're"
    "your the one who turned this frown upside down" I like this line, but it doesn't completely make sense.

    Keep on writing