Wow, once again you made me speech less, a very great job, I really love that poem, and very glad to read it, tnx for sharing it, and a 5/5 from me as it dont deserve anything less.

Hmm, seems lately your poetry has taken a turn for some history, or references to history. That's awesome Noni, I love history! This one was an interesting piece. Really good choice in the title. Well, if you understood it like I did.

Woah! This is a great poem!! Its awesome! I really like the way its written and the flow of it. keep it up! 5/5 no questions asked!

Wow, through that poem you made me relate to it and i think that's really important to do. Thanx for the read, your poem was "Tha Bomb Diggity Fresh"...Keep up the good work!

Wow...Thats sooo true...

I was sitting in my math class a couple days ago and i couldnt help to overhear a convo going on...this girl was talking about how music is like awesome and cant stand poetry and another girl was like...ya poetry is shit...and i just sat there was like..wow..i cant believe u just said that but still sat there in silence as most of us poets probably do...sitting in our own little fantasy world:P

anyways back to ur poem...10/5

even tho ive only read 2 of ur poems...ur on my faves list:P

5/5 this such a very great poem i do really like the way u write poets its such a very unique so great job u impress my really... so keep on writing and continue sharing w/us god bless u always

Great work..
keep writing

Great poem 5/5

Interesting piece for sure,
I like the title,
and the over all feel
of the poem...

I think you have written this one spontaenously which is effective.

This poem is one of the most mind-opening poems I have read today. And that's saying a lot, since I've been going through the published works of famous poets all day. Good job.

Brilliant, the best poem you asked me to look at. the rhyming was not at all forced and it seemed very natural with what the poem means because sometimes someone will rhyme but the words dont fit, this poem all fitted and came together well. well done

Oh my gosh. This was so well written I don't know what to say! The words were beyond well done, and you have a great way with all of your descriptions and such. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Incredible, you really are a great poet. I love your last two stanzas. Your rhyming was amazing.

Awesome Job
5/5

Good, but i didn't like it as much as your others... you're still an exceptional writer, great job