My journey

Great poem very well done i think this poem is definetely something that needs to be heard and thanks for the comment

keenan

A very interesting topic you chose to write on here. I liked your general idea, and the imagry is somthing most can relate to in some point in his or her life.

The road to recovery is to
take my medicine
go to therapy, get rid of bad stuff
stop absorbing poison.

This was the only sentace that didn't seem to fit... it went on for to many lines trying to finnish the sentance, it threw the flow of the poem off.

This one for me was hard to give a vote on, emotions spilled like this takes some time to think on... before commiting on... is there a closure to this poem or part 2? i like to read it if so.

Great poem i didnt relaize that i had it on there twice thanx