This is amazing! One of the best poems i've read in a while. |
This is a really amazing poem!!! =] it is incredible...KEEP UP THE FANTASTIC WRITING!!! |
Wow I loved this poem, its amazing.. and so true sometimes the people who are the most popular and stuff in highschool have the hardest lives to get through afterwards. Nice work |
Wow I loved this poem, its amazing.. and so true sometimes the people who are the most popular and stuff in highschool have the hardest lives to get through afterwards. Nice work |
Your probly the most talented poet on this site..beautiful poemk..if you read sum of mine an commented it would be much appreciatde. |
by Whitey
Hehe, anotha brilliant piece from a brilliant person, hehe, ive got nothing more to say, this piece is flawless, cheers buddy!!! |
by X2892
WoW this is very very good^.^ 5/5 |
+.+It's a beautifully written piece. Is this about anyone or did you just make it up?? 5/5+.+ |
by Misstress
Well done, Ive enjoyed reading this one. |
by Jenni Marie
Wow! This was excellent, good flow, amazing imagery. 5/5 Well done. |
by aDORKable x3
Fantastic Jenna! I really enjoyed reading this one. it was a well written poem.. the ending really got me! great job!! |
by Oscar
Dang, this was incredible, it ends on such a strong note yet it is so simple. Remarkable. 5/5 |
by Truest Lies
The words were raw and emotionless, and yet they added up to cause such a feeling. It was as though it was said to be sarcastic and rude, almost, but at the end it ended in a light of sadness, of tears, maybe a dash of hope that faded long ago. |
Omg this is so nice. i really loved this poem. its so great and very well written. i loved the rhymings u got there. keep up the good work. 5/5 ur a really great writter. |
WOW! i LOVED this one!!! outstanding...i thought the title was a little dumb before i read it but this poem is awesome! |
5/5 wow another amazing poem, i love it! they're all so beautiful!! |
by Kayla
Oh my, this is a wonderful poem Lush.. I'm not surprised at all that this one helped you make it to the top of the charts. It's very good, makes you really think about things, you know? A lot of people don't think that things like that could happen but they could be right this second but they don't have any idea. Sorry if this comment didn't make sense.. but once again, awesome job Lush! You rock =D keep up the good work!! 5/5 <3 |
by Birgit
Love it! :] Keep it up! =) |