My Unspoken Desires,,

by Just That Girl   Oct 13, 2006


He told me that I am the only one,
That there was no other
He made me feel so damn good
I could not possibly ask for more

I gave him my heart
So he could love me forever
For him that was the best Christmas present
Or at least that is what he said

How could I be so stupid?
Believing all his alibis,
When he was out with her
I was at home loving him even more

Alas now my heart is broken
Nothing can make is whole
And now I want my heart back
He is not taking good care of it,
Anymore

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    I know what's it's like to feel the emotion in this poem.
    And the way you wrote, just brought all of it back.
    That's talent if you can dig into somebody with just a few stanza's.
    You my dear are amazing.
    5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine

    Nice, I undertsand the feleing (Even though I myself have not experienced it) I'm kinda too young to date, so you can't have my FULL opinion, but a nice poem all the same

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Hello Haya!
    I so like your name...!
    lol, back to the poem, its very touching..I can strongly understand how this feels since I'm feeling the same, Hehe! =D

    but well,,those are guyz...they keep torturing us like hell!
    Please just keep that up and stay strong
    I'm sure You'll be willing to do that sweetie ;)

    Luved your poem
    Yours
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this was so great, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    This poem is nice . I can relate to this sorta (: Lovely .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

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