Comments : My Unspoken Desires,,

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    I love it!! Excellent rhyming, great flow. I loved your word usage. It was such an incredible write. Great Job!

    && Thanks for the comment, it means a lot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    Yeh Girl i deff enjoyed it! Great poem! Nice emotion! Nice choice of words! and yeh nice rhyming! Keep It Up!
    Luv yew!

    Keep Smiling
    -*-Tormented

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    This poem is nice . I can relate to this sorta (: Lovely .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this was so great, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Hello Haya!
    I so like your name...!
    lol, back to the poem, its very touching..I can strongly understand how this feels since I'm feeling the same, Hehe! =D

    but well,,those are guyz...they keep torturing us like hell!
    Please just keep that up and stay strong
    I'm sure You'll be willing to do that sweetie ;)

    Luved your poem
    Yours
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine

    Nice, I undertsand the feleing (Even though I myself have not experienced it) I'm kinda too young to date, so you can't have my FULL opinion, but a nice poem all the same

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    I know what's it's like to feel the emotion in this poem.
    And the way you wrote, just brought all of it back.
    That's talent if you can dig into somebody with just a few stanza's.
    You my dear are amazing.
    5/5.