by Natalie Oct 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
My green eyed reflection, |
I've never read this kind of poem before; I love it. Especially because some of the lines rhyme, but it's not over the top---Also, the repitition has a nice effect on the poem---You should write more of these! Love it, hun---5/5 |
by Tammie
Wow, that looks like a really hard style to write. But you did it very well. I like the story behind it, and the ending finished it perfectly. =] 5/5 |
I've never heard of a 'Monchielle' poem before, it's neat though. The repeating line really helps the flow and makes the meaning stronger. 5/5 |
by ether
Awwh! Nata!! That was so good and sad! I loved the second stanza, it flowed so well. The vocaublary was great and it actually seemed to flow better than your other poems because you used less of the "bigger" words. Great poem, 5/5 Ily |
by isaiah
U a beast shordy |