Hey darl a very good poem very well written and detailed. keep it up xx

I have said this before and I will say it again...You have such a talent for writing poetry!!!

Well done and keep it up! I love reading your poems...

Love

Lysette x x x

Well Nat, that poem seemed more like you. It flowed very well and it seemed more relaxed than your other poems. Well done on this one SMAWCE sister, I am proud of you!

Good write, NatterPatter.

i hope you're doing alright.. you know whenever you need to talk, i'm HERE. never doubt it, hun.

*hugs tight*

i miss you.
keep up the fantastical work.

E>

Great poem. I loved the rhyming scheme and admire the choice of words you used cause I know it would be hard writing everything you want to in just six stanzas, but you did it very well. Great job
-Shannon♥

Wow this poem is really really good. i loved it. it's so deep. it's great nice work shanik

Beautiful job. Great topic, perfect last two lines. keep it up

I love the first stanza .
Yu are one amazing writer .
I like how yu chose to end the poem.
..ღ__MiNDYY

U a beast shordy

U a beast shordy

Awwh! Nata!! That was so good and sad! I loved the second stanza, it flowed so well. The vocaublary was great and it actually seemed to flow better than your other poems because you used less of the "bigger" words. Great poem, 5/5 Ily

jess ~

I've never heard of a 'Monchielle' poem before, it's neat though. The repeating line really helps the flow and makes the meaning stronger. 5/5

Wow, that looks like a really hard style to write. But you did it very well. I like the story behind it, and the ending finished it perfectly. =] 5/5

Tammie xo

I've never read this kind of poem before; I love it. Especially because some of the lines rhyme, but it's not over the top---Also, the repitition has a nice effect on the poem---You should write more of these! Love it, hun---5/5