SEPARATION

Much imagery in this deep dark poem that stirs the mind heart and even soul to ponder that word

Awesome poem. It's really interesting and different, I enjoyed readin it.

"The soul fades away
as the body's carried
the opposite way.
With tears along their faces
these two friends spread apart
all caused by a miserable event
a five letter short word:
D-E-A-T-H."

That whole stanza was amazingly done. Loved it. Keep it up! 5/5

--Angie xoxo

Very awesome poem... well u do a great job this is such a very interesting to read. keep up the good work, god bless5/5

Beautiful sad penned, "What's so precious that's blinding, Where is the focus on what's true, Some promises made are binding, As for wisdom who has a clue. Why keep giving pearls to swine, Holding on with baited breath, Unless we seek the true vine, The way will only end in death..."

Another original way of bringing about a subject that should (in a way) be talked about, and yet more important, never be witnessed. Just a few days ago actually I was walking along the road by my house and saw a dead dear on the side of the road. You'd think that death is a part of nature, but still it's not something to be witnessed in that way. It can leave the scars that cease to be seen... Good write.
Again I have no complaints, and I'm sorry that I can't offer any critique, but you have some good writes here.