Very interesting write, you have a way with your writing that is different.

Just on writing on what you feel and like

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Interesting, a unique write. I like it though. Sorry, i can't think of much to comment it on. Good write. Keep it up. =] 5/5

I loved that, its soo sad but also beautiful and unique xx

Another original way of bringing about a subject that should (in a way) be talked about, and yet more important, never be witnessed. Just a few days ago actually I was walking along the road by my house and saw a dead dear on the side of the road. You'd think that death is a part of nature, but still it's not something to be witnessed in that way. It can leave the scars that cease to be seen... Good write.
Again I have no complaints, and I'm sorry that I can't offer any critique, but you have some good writes here.

Beautiful sad penned, "What's so precious that's blinding, Where is the focus on what's true, Some promises made are binding, As for wisdom who has a clue. Why keep giving pearls to swine, Holding on with baited breath, Unless we seek the true vine, The way will only end in death..."

Very awesome poem... well u do a great job this is such a very interesting to read. keep up the good work, god bless5/5

Awesome poem. It's really interesting and different, I enjoyed readin it.

"The soul fades away
as the body's carried
the opposite way.
With tears along their faces
these two friends spread apart
all caused by a miserable event
a five letter short word:
D-E-A-T-H."

That whole stanza was amazingly done. Loved it. Keep it up! 5/5

--Angie xoxo

Much imagery in this deep dark poem that stirs the mind heart and even soul to ponder that word