The Heart of Souls

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Oct 13, 2006


Hide the lips blushed with paint,
With their sorrowful shawdowed lies,
Tell fallen words that do not listen,
Of blacked, crushed, laughing cries.
Hide a smile so cold and blunt,
One singing gently deep within a soul,
Telling of a lie so riddled and puzzling,
Concealing a heart covered immensly in charcoal.
Lips splashed with lipstick of the dead,
Listening closely to unarmored deceits,
For the storm roars deep inside,
Where the heart of souls tiredly beats.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Oh dear.....

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Fabulous...you've done a great job5/5

    god bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by Broken Dreams

    Excellently written 5/5!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Wow, symbolism like crazy! I loved the entire poem, but my favorite line was:

    Lips splashed with lipstick of the dead,

    Which was odd, because I normally wouldn't like lines like that... But your word choice pulled it off. Your word choice in this poem leaves it deserving of at least a 4.5, so 5/5 to raise the rating. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    You have a truly, amazing way with words. I really enjoyed reading this poem.. well done 5/5.

    So glad You decided to stay.. :] xx

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