WOW!!! i love it! this is the first poem by you that i have read and am severly disappointed already that people would downrate you so much as to make you leave the site...please stay...i'll vote 5 for everyone of ur poems to try to raise it but i dunno if it will do anything cuz umm u look like u have alot of poems:P

You have a truly, amazing way with words. I really enjoyed reading this poem.. well done 5/5.

So glad You decided to stay.. :] xx

Wow, symbolism like crazy! I loved the entire poem, but my favorite line was:

Lips splashed with lipstick of the dead,

Which was odd, because I normally wouldn't like lines like that... But your word choice pulled it off. Your word choice in this poem leaves it deserving of at least a 4.5, so 5/5 to raise the rating. Great job!

Excellently written 5/5!!!!

Fabulous...you've done a great job5/5

god bless!

Oh dear.....