Ok well the context you put the poem in makes it seem more informational than truely a poem. you could almost imagine reading this in a book describeing love in an articulate manor. But that said, you have a very mature outlook on love and the man that earns such a love will be "truely happy". The structure was great and the idea was put out with awesome ingenuity and at the end I took in a breath of refreshment to find original thinking of a complexity such as love...