Another really good poem.. You need to edit it and get rid of the extra bits that aren't supposed to be there ;] so much for the happy ending.. yeah really liked it :] well done 5/5 xx

Thats another amazing poem!

"So much for my happy ending"
this line reminded me of a song lol :D:D

keep it up!
5/5

Lol. this is what you submitted for my other contest! i like it.

Another great poem. You are very talented! 5/5

I really enjoyed reading this poem as well.. thank god YOUR on my favorites list!! Great work!!

I loved the ending part...the whole whisper thing. Great job once again Hunn.

5/5

-Jenna.

I really liked this one...especially the ending...very sad..good job!

Ohhh, this almost brought tears to my eyes the words hit me so strongly.
I loved the opening in this, it really pulled me in and from there on I found it to get better and better.
My favourite part was the whisper at the end, I thought that made the poem very powerful, and was a perfect way to wrap up.