I really liked the B.R.M. part.. each stanza starts with a letter... so cool!
take care..
luv,
haya 3gab =]

Nice poem good job keep it up

REALLY G00D P0EM HUN! GREAT J0B && PERFECT RHYMiNG!

*GiRL iN L0VE

The title idea was very creative and draws the reader in. i liked it and it was nice. sweet but short. good job,
love ya lots,
sore

Holy crap, if I could write as well as you, I'd be rich! Ok, well maybe not, but that was truly perfect. If I could mark higher than 5/5 I would! I'm sure to read some more of your poems, and hpowfully they're as amazing as this one is.

It was sweet, short and simple, yet descriptive beyond description! Keep it up, and you're sure to become on e of my favourites.
[*:.heart.broken.:~] xoxo