Need To Say Goodbye

by Andi   Oct 13, 2006


Her heart soon filled with sadness,
as she left him in the rain,
chocking on his many tears,
and whispering her name.

it was hard for her to do this,
for she loved him very much,
but she couldn't live alone,
for the few moments of there love.

she'd given him many chances,
all of which he had ignored,
she wanted something better,
but her heart called for him for sure.

she knew she had to leave,
but it hurt to say goodbye,
she couldn't show her breaking heart,
or this would kill her for sure.

the first few weeks were difficult,
chocking on her tears,
sometimes difficult to even breathe,
she felt she loved him more than before.

but she deprived herself of him,
and eventually let go,
she prayed he'd do the same,
so they both could be happy once more.

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  • 16 years ago

    by angelis

    Beautiful poem
    You are very talented.

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica Jovie©

    I liked it alot!! it flows really well except for this one part
    "she knew she had to leave,
    but it hurt to say goodbye,
    she couldn't show her breaking heart,
    or this would kill her for sure."

    kinda messes the flow but otherwise i lvoe it!! i gave it a 5..hope you return the favor

  • 18 years ago

    by Jane Lowe

    Hey Andi.
    Thank you so much for your comment on my poem "Memories". Means a lot!
    I love this poem, very honest and true, two words that mkean the same, haha.
    Well hpe you have a lovely day and keep up witht he wonderful poetry!
    Love
    Jane
    x-x-x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by ModernDavinci

    Wow. This is very sad. I relate, though, too. Alot. Hmm.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mystic Enchantress

    I can totally relate to this poem. After a time you cannot cope with a certain situation cause it doesn' make sence.
    you have done a wonderful job. I rate you 5/5 keep up writing

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