All I have to say is beautiful...

The dust of eve
Fades with the light
A broken syllable of lullaby
A different day without night

the beauty in that first stanza is amazing...you painted a wonderful image in my mind. This entire poem, I think, is talking about different morals and life beliefs that people have...that's what I got out of it. Regardless, I liked the poem structure, and emotion.

Keep it up

I really luvd the imagination and especially the choice of words lol i wish i could write like this 5/5