by X2892 Oct 14, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Driving me crazy; |
by Kaila
This si so cute but somewhat sad! All I can is work on your wording a bit more and it will be terrific! |
by Brook
This is really cute. lol it made me smile =] its sweet. definite 5/5. |
by me
Naaa paulie let me find out who dis girl next door is i hope it aint da old women who use to live next to us lma0 o0o hell no0 dont tell me it aint her nd its maribel....i c u tryna get wit my loser hmmm...nice poem 5/5 too 1z. |
I like the whole 'Girl Next Door' thing . I`ve always wanted to write a 'Boy Next Door'(: ANYWAY this is a nicely written poem(: It`s sweet and wonderfully done, although the fact that you used 'girl next door' so many times in the poem kinda ... made the phrase overused ? But still a nicely done poem. |
by Kristina
Wonderful work you did on this poem here. it was really sweet. 5/5 |