Hey, what a nice poem, so much love flowing through it and a story that was told, I liked it... Thumbs up *5/5* effort... Karms.

Very awesome and thanks for the comment told you i'd return the favor => 5/5

Lovely write..
Just keep on writing on what you feel and like..you have the talent in words.
5/5

Girl next door... pretty good poem of yours..5/5

I liked it, i think you overused the title in the poem too much but apart from that it was good, well done
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Thats sooo nice!!!
awww i could feel the love in it...

keep it up!

Aww it's so cute. ^_^ I loved it. The flow was great, and descriptions were wonderfully done. Keep writing! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I love the passionate sentiment of this romantic love poem

only one suggestion
change

"a life that didn't deserved to live"
to
a life that didn't deserve to live

This poem is soo sweet and worded so beautifully, I love your chose of words. This girl next door must be very lucky to have you. Keep up the good work5/5

lots of love *~*Becky*~*

Awwwww........sweet poem i liked it a 5/5

Awwww....thats such a sweet poem! It's written with such feeling and depth---I love how you portray so much emotion in you poems---5/5 Amazing write---

That was cute nice job

Wonderful work you did on this poem here. it was really sweet. 5/5

~Kristina

I like the whole 'Girl Next Door' thing . I`ve always wanted to write a 'Boy Next Door'(: ANYWAY this is a nicely written poem(: It`s sweet and wonderfully done, although the fact that you used 'girl next door' so many times in the poem kinda ... made the phrase overused ? But still a nicely done poem.
..__MiNDYY

Naaa paulie let me find out who dis girl next door is i hope it aint da old women who use to live next to us lma0 o0o hell no0 dont tell me it aint her nd its maribel....i c u tryna get wit my loser hmmm...nice poem 5/5 too 1z.

This is really cute. lol it made me smile =] its sweet. definite 5/5.
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This si so cute but somewhat sad! All I can is work on your wording a bit more and it will be terrific!