Simple, and yet complex. Beautiful in it's entirety, and intruiging in it's single words. Overall flowing into a whole that is extraordinary. Absolutely wonderful job on this piece. *5/5

Ooh! i love this! it's so true. it says so much in so little words! great job!!

Forever*Yours

This was good. Short but to the point. The simpleness of this has both positive and negative parts.
Positive being the fact it's easy to understand and read. The negative being from a critical point of view it seems just as you're just listing words.
On the first and third lines you have double plurals. You should drop one "s" on each line.
Good attempt. Thanks for sharing.

Great poem. loved the detailing in such a short poem. keep up the great work. 5/5

I love this. Short but not simple, eloquent but not too wordy. It captures you and causes your mind to, not really wander but think I suppose. I love your choice of words, they add a powerful effect to the poem, and the colliding of each subject into the next. I especially loved the line,
"Desires and fate entangle"

Excellent read

So cool and true
I liked the meaning hiding behind
Keep it up
Laura

Short, and straight up. That is so true. I love the style, the message was clear. You did anexcellent job. 5/5

Well penned, powerful and moreover completely true. a poem with great meaning and great vocabulary, excellent.

Short yet simple...well written...very true and the choice of words-Superb!..and the meaning is well portrayed through this good write!
5/5
Kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

Hmm i like this poem...simple but good..seems lik u hav fame in ur poems..mayb this should b ryme..idk y but i think it should...its a 5/5 cuz its simple and basically says everything..

It was short
but it was good
and i liked
the word choice

5/5