Beautifully written. Powerful and heartfelt. Remember, things are not always as they appear. What looks like drunken pity to the outsider may well be the drowning of the demons that cling to ones soul. Sometimes the strength to shake those demons slips through ones fingers and all that is left is numbness to ease the pain that no one else sees.

Wow,this happens to so many people.
very beautifully written =]
--lexie♥

Hey beautiful girls! that was splendid! I applaude you! seriously tho lol it was really awesome work :) no wonder u collob *grins* I loved your rhymes and ur theme... sumtimes flow wasn't perfect but who's is? still a 5/5

thanks so much 4 the lovely comment :) It's awesome 4 ME 2 have people read it and say they relate that is wat is awesome :) *hugs* c u nxt times lovely ladies!

ruthie

It's sad the way people so easily give up on life, the way when everything is going wrong they won't turn to God because they blame Him when we really have only ourselves to blame. But I understand the demon chasing theory. It gets the best of most people. Excellent!