But you lied

by brittany   Oct 14, 2006


You said you loved me and you cared
you said you would always be there
but you lied

you told me you would never hurt me
you told me you would never make me cry
but you lied

you said i was beautiful
you said i was so smart
but you lied

you broke my heart,when you said you never would
you cheated on me,when you said you never could

i told you from the start
I would leave you if you broke my heart
so goodbye
ill always love you
but you lied

hey let me know what you think its my first poem i ever wrote and im not sure if its any good thanx!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nikoshiana

    Hi brittany, nikoshiana here, love this poem so much, how i felt about my ex, well done xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is really good..i've been through the same kind of pain..excellent job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lutu

    Really sad .. like the basterd isnt really worth to be missed.. n keep writing :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lutu

    Kinda went through the same. Great poem. Love it

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