Honestly i did enjoy every word of it, it is a great poem as it can hold many debate, from what i read, it is a poem in which you want heaven cause from your point of view its better than this life that is why you do dream about it, and in a way the way I intrepted the poem its us ppl when we lose hope in one place we wish for another place, rather than trying to make this life like a heaven togheter, this poem really touched me as it made me to think and realize many concept of it, i give a 5/5 to it, very nicely and loveable poem

I used to write in non rhyming- free style forms of poetry, I like free styles and definitely loved this one,
The words used is calming, like a scented wind.
It is truly a worthwhile read.

your getting better and better in each poem ..
keep it up.

I'm not to sure on this one, because i don't usually like poems that don't rhyme, but i don't know why you thought it was so bad, it was very well written.