To Belong

by Jesse Miller   Oct 14, 2006


Wheather I'm in a room all alone, or out with my friends
I feel empty and my heart is stone, with the pain god sends
I can't tell where the misory begins or ends
I can feel the hate of fate witout forgiveness or amends

Everything is just like a taunt... and life feels long
Maybe because all I want...is to belong

I push away seeing only the gloomy, instead of what I need the most
It feels like people see right through me, as if I were a ghost
Sometimes I think I found someone that can see inside me when we get close
But then I get hallow after having to swallow feeling whole - almost

I'm glad this isn't a lyric... it would be such a sad song
But even though I fear it... all I need is to belong

*please critique, vote, and comment...it would mean alot to me*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Andi

    Hey thx 4 the comment! i actually am really greatful for the tips as well as the complements....most ppl write the same old one liners (i'm as guilty as charged) i really love your writting! u have a strong structure....i just wish you'd write a little bit more so i could get more of a taste for your style of writing! but i thouroughly enjoyed reading your poems....def keep up the good work!
    andi

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    AWESOME!!!!
    that poem really spoke to me. it has a gr8 lesson in it. it shows that u are talented:)