AWESOME!!!!
that poem really spoke to me. it has a gr8 lesson in it. it shows that u are talented:)

Hey thx 4 the comment! i actually am really greatful for the tips as well as the complements....most ppl write the same old one liners (i'm as guilty as charged) i really love your writting! u have a strong structure....i just wish you'd write a little bit more so i could get more of a taste for your style of writing! but i thouroughly enjoyed reading your poems....def keep up the good work!
andi