by shay Oct 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
9 months have gone so fast, |
by Alexandra
I think you need to work a litle more on your rithm! |
by Flaminia
Beautiful poem,may be meter should be set up better,but on the emptions it sends and the messages it hides,nothing to say.That's a full 5 out of 5!!! |
by Roxy
Wow, a very strong poem,showing emotion and much more. |