9 months

by shay   Oct 14, 2006


9 months have gone so fast,
we hate this feeling and don't want it to last,
birthdays, anniversaries easter and Christmas to,
we dedicate this poem to you.

you are still the best we cant deny,
we want you back we can not lie,
heart ache and tears will always flow,
heavy like a strong wind blowing,
2 kids a wife and many mates ,
we wish there weren't so many debates,

as time flies your still the best dad,
you still stand out from the rest of the crowd,
love hope strength with us now,
as our family takes our vow,

we loved you then,
and we love you now,
nothing will stop us,
even though people still want to know why, how and when.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Alexandra

    I think you need to work a litle more on your rithm!

  • 18 years ago

    by Flaminia

    Beautiful poem,may be meter should be set up better,but on the emptions it sends and the messages it hides,nothing to say.That's a full 5 out of 5!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow, a very strong poem,showing emotion and much more.
    It shows how you felt for him then and how you feel for him now.
    great job.
    xoxroxyxox