Recapturing the vibee

by Letty   Oct 14, 2006


We use to be perfect together.
We use to have fun.
We use to make plans to stay
together and to become as one.

I don't know what happened.
Somehow we got lost along the way.
I thought that we would be together,
until our dying days.

But I was so wrong.
I guess our love was based on lies.
But I'm still in love with you and I
really want you back.

So I'm asking you,

can we start over?
Can we give it another try?
Do you think deep down in your
heart we can try recapturing
the vibe?

I use to call you every night.
Just to hear your voice.
And whenever you said I love you
the words were never forced.

I gave you my heart back then, and
you gave me yours too.
That's why I just can't let go.
Because our love just can't be through.

So I'm asking you,

Can we start over?
Can we give it another try?
Do you think deep down in your
heart we can try recapturing the vibe?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh my God, this almost had me crying, for i can relate. My favourite of yours so far. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Another Dreamer

    Hey. this is an awesome poem. props!

    i especially liked the line that you used a few times:

    Nice choice of words. Again, good job. 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Good poem.

    something i realized in your poetry is you tend to have the same words starting in your first verse...

    example

    We use to be perfect together.
    We use to have fun.
    We use to make plans to stay
    together and to become as one.

    We use to... is at the beggining and together is repeated... try breaking it up a bit... i find it gives a more.. confident vibe...

    Example

    We use to be perfect... just you and me
    and we always had fun
    We use to make plans to stay;
    together and to become as one.

    or something like that

    -Terra

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem dear,
    i luv u and ur poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Lovely write,with a lot of emotions...
    Full of yearning..

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