VIRTUAL REALITY

by Flaminia   Oct 14, 2006


Totally doomed
in a world which isn't mine,
born to live
knowing I'll die.

Waiting for the moment,
when I'll touch dreamed love,
just close my eyes to see it
just not trying to catch it
as pail it fades away.

Last night my ideal reality
was intensely deep so different,
from my living essence.
Waking ashamed,
don't leave it there
alone.

Tried taking it with me,
as my hand gently touched it,
my delicate reality vanished nowhere
with my dreams,
in my dreams.

I know never will it come again,
never will I see it once more:
I guess I should just try catching my virtuality,
because the values I dream of
will never be reality.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Another nice poem!
    you got the talent...
    the words you used where nice too..
    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    An interesting write, and i like the unique topic. You wrote it well, with a good use of vocab, and emotions expressed well. My favorite stanza was the first one, very deep i think. Well done. =] 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Vonnie McHugh

    Such emotions well written

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Simply beautiful. I like you style of writing, its unique. Nice flow and imagery. I especially liked the lines:

    "Last night my ideal reality
    was intensely deep so different,
    from my living essence.
    Waking ashamed,
    don't leave it there
    alone."

    Made me think =) Your a great writing, keep up the awesome work.
    --Angie xoox

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    It seems also the dreams we chase are usually just out of reach yet only in our dreams are we content my interpretation of this poem is fleeting moment in which a dream seemed to be a reality..great poem

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