Nice job JESSY great poem 5/5 from me keep it up

Such a sweet poem, wonderful job on this, I really enjoyed reading it.. well done 5/5 xx

That was very sweet Jessy, i emjoyed reading it. It was very cute, my friend. well done
xxxxx

Very sweet poem. Really enjoy this one.

Well done, the flow was exceptional. Love poems about drams.

Great Job

Happiness
Jeannie

Drams=dreams. Sorry

Awe! That was so adorable. It made me smile! Tehehe. Keep it up hun, that had great imagery and a very good ending. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

Awh! Yay! Another love poem. ;P This was great Jessie! Extremely nice flow, and I loved the rhyming scheme in this piece, it was great! ..Your vocab aswel was amazing, you're really growing in that area. ;P Tehe. It was beautifuly done! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Wow very blissful.... great job jess
5/5
god bless

Wow. Beautifully written poem. The descriptions were amazing, and the vocab was beyond what I could imagine was in a poem. Lol. I like how the title isn't really in the poem much at all, but it still tells about the poem itself. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Very well written poem, and nice meaning; I just have trouble getting into 'love' poems. I can't really wrong you for that, though. Let's see... I do like this line:

Opening her eyes; a sweet smile from her collection he takes

It's an interesting way of rewriting the same-old same-old 'she opened her eyes and smiled'. Nice work!

5/5.

Awhhh this was really sweet, i liked it.

Girl this one is good as hell i mean seriously i can really relate to this one i dream about my boyfriend alot

Awww.....very sweet and loving. I love poems about dreams. :) Keep up the good work! 5/5

Innoc3ntStar

Wow Jessy! I love it so much!

My fave lines were

'Opening her eyes; a sweet smile from her collection he takes
For as she looks over, she's faced with the man of her dreams..'

they give the poem a great ending!
well done

sophie:) xo

ps. thanx 4 the comment, i changed the title to ' mascara covered eyes' lol
thanx i agree its a betta title. :)

This was so heartfelt and sweet...I really enjoyed this...Don't ever give up wrotong, hun!

*Writing

That was beautiful love poem.
Well, I can't say nothing more then
well done and you're a great writer!
5/5 God Bless

~*Tay*~