by just a little girl Oct 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
It doesn't have to be this way |
by Zara Baines
VERY GOOD, WELL WRITTEN |
by ragrag
I love it! |
by Cella Bella
Beautifully depressing lol. Some parts seemed to lack the flow the rest of poem held. I think if you spiced up your vocab a little, this could be a really great poem. Good read. 5/5 |
by Tricky Daze
Really interesting idea,this was really different especially |
by amoxi
This poem was very well written and it had a lot of emotion, im confused about the end tho, did she tell her friend to kill herself too so they will still be together? anyway it was a very good poem 5/5 |