How Much Longer?

by Kristina   Oct 14, 2006


My will to go on is slowly fading away,
My soul is being torn every passing day,
The gun is to my head,
And ready to be pulled.

How much longer will it be,
Till I am finally free?
How much more,
Can my broken heart take?

I cant wait till I'm dead,
Cant wait to be out of this world,
I'll be on my own,
Without anyone bothering me.

Copyright © November 12, 2005 - Kristina M
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  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Short poem, but that doesn't affect the meaning at all. It's well written and flows well... sorry, I can't really say much else about it. I liked it!

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Ooo, i like this.. i guess im in one of my moods these days, anything thats sad and dark appeals to me.. hehe.. but i reli like this poem.. i like how u keep em short and manage to get ur point across.. convenient title.. loved ur last stanza.. it imp. for me that a writer makes a grand ending, and uve made ur point..

    gud job
    take care
    NannO

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Oh wow...this is a wonderful poem...so much emotion...i truly loved it...5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Superb! sad but superb!

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