Huh, no comments...? o.O

The flow was really good up until like the last line. It kind of fell apart then, but was good up until it. It was sad, and I'm sorry. =( I know what it's like to be deceived. The poem was like a story. I liked that. It gave me a feel of what you're going through, your deep feelings, etc. Even if it was an old poem. =P 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This is really good! i love the rhyme scheme!!! and i can totally relate to the story....def keep up the good work! i'd appreciate it if u'd comment on my poems
andi

Dont you just hate when the one you love lies to you and you know that he is lieing but he denies it..grrrr..
I feel for you on this one..5/5

If that poems from experience im rght beside u on that cause it happened to me

I found this really sad, it was a moving piece.
I enjoyed the wording alot, it really captured me.
I thought the flow was a little jumpy towards the end, but apart from that, it was a wonderful write.

Omg. That Is Amazing :]
I Love It, Keep Up The Good Work! :]
xx Shannon xx ILY xx

Hey that was a really sad heratfelt poem...hope your ok now...
its very well written and despite not having many rhymes, its still flowing perfectly..keep it up.
xx