Not Real Love

by Kristina   Oct 14, 2006


You tell me you love me,
But I know its not true,
You will never love me,
As much as I love you.

You give me everything I want,
And tell me the sweetest things,
But the love you say you have for me,
Is not real, because pain is all I feel.

But I love the way you treat me,
And the things that you tell me,
And when I'm feeling alone,
You make me feel right at home.

Copyright © October 20th, 2005 - Kristina M
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  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Aw that was cute! 5/5

    God Bless,
    Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    This is really cute. but sad at the same time. for being an old poem its really good!!! great write 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Nice poem.. i esp. liked the beginning.. loved the emotion and the rhyme scheme.. however, by the last stanza, u diverted off track from the main topic.. (or at least it seemed like that to me) i mean, ur not saying that this isnt real love, and then u say that u love the way he treats u.. that kinda condused me..
    other than that.. i love the emotion in the 2nd stanza, tho it didnt reli rhyme, but it was good..

    keep writing
    take care
    NannO

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow.....nice poem very sad though but great poem..Kepp on writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww it's cute. =) I liked it a lot. There was true emotion in it, and you had it short and to the point. The flow was thought out well too. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

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