Lovely write well done

Aww it's cute. =) I liked it a lot. There was true emotion in it, and you had it short and to the point. The flow was thought out well too. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow.....nice poem very sad though but great poem..Kepp on writing!

Nice poem.. i esp. liked the beginning.. loved the emotion and the rhyme scheme.. however, by the last stanza, u diverted off track from the main topic.. (or at least it seemed like that to me) i mean, ur not saying that this isnt real love, and then u say that u love the way he treats u.. that kinda condused me..
other than that.. i love the emotion in the 2nd stanza, tho it didnt reli rhyme, but it was good..

keep writing
take care
NannO

This is really cute. but sad at the same time. for being an old poem its really good!!! great write 5/5

Aw that was cute! 5/5

God Bless,
Taylor