Oh wow, I loved this one. It was a totally different ending than what I had predicted. Keep it up. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

Excellant word choice and rhyming. i was completely expecting it to have a depressing end, but the end is powerful. wonderful

I loved ur poem it touched a missind part in me

Wow Bill this was well written.
My fav stanza was:

Demons haunt me day and night
Burrowing under my well worn skin
Driving me to destroy what is right
Life destroyed by the evil that lies within

Hooked me from start to finish.

What a deep and powerful piece. It is amazing what love from someone can do for us. Excellent job!

Wow! I know just how you feel. Things in life that are bad or painful have a way of hanging on, and sometimes it takes someone special to free us. I'm glad you found someone to walk with you in your journey towards freedom.

Very nice and beautiful