Time Moved On For Me

by Sarah Ann   Oct 14, 2006


It's been years, and I have suffered
Every thought went back to you
And I've never found another
I was broken, but stood true

It's been months and I have realized
I should move on, time is here
Life has never been so painful
And ironically so clear.

It's been weeks and time is ticking
I was all cried out and sore
Nothing ever made me weaker
Love has never hurt me more

It's been days and I feel better
I am stronger, full of hate
And now I feel I'm over you,
When it seemed so far too late

((Nothing more than a vent. Sucky poems these days...))

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  • 18 years ago

    by MissGem

    That is killer i loved it! gd job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very well written. You really got your point through and you did it very well. You did an awesome job! 5/5
    Keep it up!If you could please c/r these two it would mean alot:
    Because of You
    My Worse Fear
    5/5 by the way. I can't wait to read more of your poems.

    God Bless,
    Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    It was a great write not sucky... sometimes we just need toget it all out as a way to express ourselves and then we feel better evenif it doesn't change much.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    It's not completely sucky. A little bit of a rocky start, yeah, but it's good and you seem to know which direction you want to take it. (I never know, so you're doing better than me in that department.) It just needs a little...tweaking. Set it aside and in a little while come back to it. I'm not saying it will work, but if it's any consolation it works for me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    SARAH!!! I haven't been on for days and it feels like forever. haha. I loved thissss... sry i can't leave a better comment...i g2g. ily!

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