Very nicely done Sarah. Your flow was great, and I loved the way you set this poem out, with the years, months, week, days. That was awesome. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

SARAH!!! I haven't been on for days and it feels like forever. haha. I loved thissss... sry i can't leave a better comment...i g2g. ily!

It's not completely sucky. A little bit of a rocky start, yeah, but it's good and you seem to know which direction you want to take it. (I never know, so you're doing better than me in that department.) It just needs a little...tweaking. Set it aside and in a little while come back to it. I'm not saying it will work, but if it's any consolation it works for me.

It was a great write not sucky... sometimes we just need toget it all out as a way to express ourselves and then we feel better evenif it doesn't change much.

Very well written. You really got your point through and you did it very well. You did an awesome job! 5/5
Keep it up!If you could please c/r these two it would mean alot:
Because of You
My Worse Fear
5/5 by the way. I can't wait to read more of your poems.

God Bless,
Taylor

That is killer i loved it! gd job!!