by dollwithafrown Oct 14, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
I pledge to love this world |
Nice job flowed very well and everything seems to be in place and i relate to this poem keep it up |
by Brittany C
Very good poem. Easy to understand. Has great rhythm and good word choice. |
by Katlynn
I loved the concept of this poem. It seems like you made a deal to yourself when you were little && later in life it all just went down hill. It showed what you lost && what you begin to believe i think this is an amazing poem && your talented with doing a good job at it. |
by Jenni Marie
This almost made me cry...again I liked how you showed your pesrspective from both sides. |
by Jessica
Awh, another sad poem hun. I didnt like this one as much but it was still good. The emotion was a little weak I felt. The descriptions and flow were good though. Keep up the good work sweetie. 5/5 |